Hello Karen,
That is really the sort of thing about which only someone who knows all the details about you could give an opinion, so it is beyond the scope of the forum.
Do read up our guide to ESA, which will help you to see what things they will be considering, and what problems you need to highlight in your assessment.
UC & ESA resources I am sorry we are not able to address the question you asked, but hope that helps a little,
Catherine
